on the wing of the plane

Last week George and Jeff decided to go on  holiday for a couple of weeks they noticed they had no money to pay for the plane ride.So they slowly cheeped up on to the wing then take off went the plane George and Jeff were so terrified of heights they could feel the wind pounding on each other.They started to turned into ice blocks they could feel the bird

poop falling on them  suddenly they were heating up. The sun was burning the skin and they were slowly turning into ashes so they jumped into the water and swimmend as fast as possible then they made it to land the end.